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Post by The_Custom_one on 2/15/2011, 12:10 am

Okay, I have been able to get up my entry!

"Ambush!"

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On a forest planet, a Trandoshen slaver leads a squad of Battle Droids to capture the Wookiee's outpost. However, unbeknownst to them, my small squad of Clones and ARFs have been assigned to eliminate the group, therefore destroying the threat to the Wookiee camp nearby.We just can't be spotted, or heard, or we might not defeat this threat......

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Post by Guest on 2/15/2011, 12:51 am

I like it. Will you add on?

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Post by The_Custom_one on 2/15/2011, 12:56 am

CommandoMando wrote:I like it. Will you add on?

If it is needed to be added onto!
If you guys have ideas for perfecting it, let me know!
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Post by Guest on 2/15/2011, 1:03 am

I think you should add on more: It's kinda small. And where's the wookie camp?

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Post by The_Custom_one on 2/15/2011, 1:59 am

CommandoMando wrote:I think you should add on more: It's kinda small. And where's the wookie camp?

That's where the Droids, and Trandoshen are going, it is still far away.
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Post by Flare on 2/15/2011, 2:59 pm

Cool vignette! Its not bad, but it doesn't look very much like Kashyyyk to me... I thought the trees were a little larger Tongue 3
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Post by The_Custom_one on 2/15/2011, 7:00 pm

Flare wrote:Cool vignette! Its not bad, but it doesn't look very much like Kashyyyk to me... I thought the trees were a little larger Tongue 3

True... well, it's some random Star Wars planet with foliage, maybe the Trandos world, I don't know. I was thinking of a particular spot, it's just a clone ambush. Wink
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Post by PerthPoke on 2/17/2011, 11:18 am

The ARF's legs are backwords when the same effect can be obtained other ways, they look kinda wonky
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Post by JackDawson1010 on 2/17/2011, 12:32 pm

perthpoke wrote:The ARF's legs are backwords when the same effect can be obtained other ways, they look kinda wonky

The backwards legs are a common effect people use to show a fig on their "knees"

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Post by the dark lord on 11/19/2012, 1:40 am

like the set mabye add a wookie out post that was destroyed
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